Date: 2010-04-08 05:17 pm (UTC)
Gorgeous, gorgeous! In my re-reading, this sentence jumped out: There, in the hidden dells the awakening Firstborn touched their own faces and knew they were alive.

That must have been such a tremendous moment, that Primordial Awakening. The Dwarf-centric soul that I have still wants to jump up and say, "But Aule's children were created first!" ;) You so beautifully capture Elvish sensitivities, especially in these early years. I admire that!!
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